In this OuBaPo experiment, I have reworked the wordless version of the page of Concrete Surfer from the OuBaPo page to follow this premise: suppose it is snobbery that causes the rift between Jean and Carol?
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In this OuBaPo experiment, I have reworked the wordless version of the page of Concrete Surfer from the OuBaPo page to follow this premise: suppose it is snobbery that causes the rift between Jean and Carol?
The ‘last present given by Dad’ hits just the right note!
Thought it would!
In both cases of reworking text for panels, I found that the key was to seize upon an idea, and have a few sub-ideas that could also be worked in. The text just then developed. So the first thing to do is seize upon an idea. I haven’t tried taking just a few select panels yet and see if I can build a story out of them.