OuBaPo experiment: Concrete Surfer

In this OuBaPo experiment, I have reworked the wordless version of the page of Concrete Surfer from the OuBaPo page to follow this premise: suppose it is snobbery that causes the rift between Jean and Carol?

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5 thoughts on “OuBaPo experiment: Concrete Surfer

  1. In both cases of reworking text for panels, I found that the key was to seize upon an idea, and have a few sub-ideas that could also be worked in. The text just then developed. So the first thing to do is seize upon an idea. I haven’t tried taking just a few select panels yet and see if I can build a story out of them.

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